About midway I started having trouble discerning who was talking. There were also some run-on sentences that could be cleaned up.
The storyline was intriguing. I felt like I was somewhere in the past and the people talking were either medicinal healers or magical healers. Correct?
Novel Novice 
About midway I started having trouble discerning who was talking. There were also some run-on sentences that could be cleaned up.
The storyline was intriguing. I felt like I was somewhere in the past and the people talking were either medicinal healers or magical healers. Correct?